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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ken Landgraf
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Ways to improve Ken Landgraf
Hi, I'm Jackson Peebles. Triton hiker, thanks for creating Ken Landgraf!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. While I think that the citations speak for themselves; the subject is notable, I feel that you admired this man (understandably) and wrote it in such a tone. If there's any way you could make it sound a bit more neutral, that'd be much appreciated!

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.