User talk:Troms509/sandbox

Hi Tom,

Great job on your article additions thus far.

A few pieces of constructive criticism:

You mention the director of the excavation as Garstang. What is his first name? I think this should be added in the beginning and then you can call him by his last name.

I am sure you are not quite finished with the project (in the same boat as myself) but I think you should try and get rid of that quote sooner rather than later. Remember we have to paraphrase and cannot use direct quote

Other than that I don't have any more advice.

Good luck with the rest of your work, it looks like you've gotten off to a good start.

Sincerely, Henry Poehlein