User talk:Trt73520

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Hello, Trt73520, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Commercial use of space - text addition
Hi @Trt73520, Very interesting text that you've drafted so far. I see you start by defining satellite systems, computer security, but what is the topic that you are expanding on? Satellite computer security? What would be the section title of the text you plan to add to the existing article? It's unclear to me what the focus is when reading the text so far. This may be bc towards the end of the contribution it starts reading more like a persuasive essay about security.

Keep in mind, the goal is to provide a neutral, fact based summary in your own words of the topic at hand based on the reliable sources you've found. It is not to persuade the readers, or create arguments for or against computer security. That is then considered original research, which is not the kind of material that Wikipedia is for. That's why it's important to have a citation to a reliable source for each sentence, so readers can verify that the text is accurate information, and not original ideas or research. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:49, 6 April 2023 (UTC)