User talk:TruffautStalker

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Dinah Shurey
Minor revisions needed. CropMilk (talk) 15:13, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
 * A well-structured and well-written draft overall!
 * Ensure that your citations are not to proxy links (if “proxy.library.carleton.ca” shows up in the URL, it’s a proxy link!)
 * Ensure that all your factual statements are cited (i.e. that “Her wartime experiences instilled a fascination of melodramatic and militaristic British experiences,” and that “The Last Post is Surrey's most controversial film,” etc.) Typically, one citation per sentence is required.
 * I also recommend that you add to the lead section to make it a full paragraph, as that is a standard feature of Wikipedia articles. Some guidelines here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Lead_section