User talk:Tsang Karl/Ketone Halogenation

Peer Review
Hi there,

Advices: Remember once you guys are adding the draft content onto the actual article, add sections and subsections for better outline of your article. Also the reference needs to be formatted properly. For the section of Application of Green Chemistry, maybe split it into multi-paragraph from "An important aspect to many..."? This just might be better for the flow of the content. My advices not necessary be correct but hope this helps. Sliverash (talk) 08:32, 30 October 2022 (UTC)

Hi everyone, My peer review is up! Good work in your sandbox. Sach548 (talk) 06:52, 31 October 2022 (UTC)