User talk:Tscottan/sandbox

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 * Are your edits for your technique section an inclusion or a different paragraph? If you're including it within what's already written, where will it be placed? I like what you have written here. There are a few typos, but those can easily be fixed.

Lead Section
 * Don't say preservation. It is very different than conservation. In conservation we are allowed to use the materials we're trying to conserve in order to save them. Preservation doesn't allow for the use of any of the materials.
 * You said,"focuses on limiting human-caused damage to marine ecosystems, restoring damaged marine ecosystems..." Here, I would put "focuses on restoring damaged marine ecosystems either by natural or man-made causes..." This is only a suggestion to help with the flow of things.
 * Again, be careful when using preserving
 * You said,"marine conservation is a relatively discipline..."...relatively what?

Overall, I like the edits you have made especially to the lead section. You have made it stronger in my opinion while giving a brief overview of the subject itself.Bmareen18 (talk) 21:37, 27 March 2018 (UTC)