User talk:Tsion s/sandbox

Peer Review
The introduction to the section you are editing was done great! It reminds the reader what population momentum is, and forces the person to make a connection as to why the implications are there. The first implication listed talks about how population will still continue to grow despite a decrease in fertility, so maybe by adding how then a population can decrease without going too much into detail since implication are the main focus. Also, on number 4 line 2, where it says, "there are more children being born" add on by saying "...than there are people dying." Or that that mortality is low because otherwise it sounds like the number of children being born is more than the replacement level, which would contradict what was said in the previous sentence. Other than that, it was well organized and the addition of the one about its effects on labor was great. VCS03 (talk) 03:14, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review by Nataliep3
The fourth point added to the Implications of population momentum is great and well written. It is clear and to the point and even written better than the rest of the article! I would suggest adding your source at the end of the article as well. Adding links to certain words or terms like, 'dependency ration' and 'fertility rate' or 'replacement level' would be helpful, as a reader. Overall great addition. Nataliep3 (talk) 04:20, 3 April 2018 (UTC)