User talk:Tsizzley21/sandbox

Hi Tom! I think your article is looking really good! You have a lot of relevant information that could help the common person identify the tree. I like how you added a paragraph on damage. A lot of plant species on Wikipedia don't have that kind of information. If I had to suggest one thing for you to change it would be a couple of grammar issues. When reading through it I found a couple of run-on sentences that could be broken up into two more concise sentences. It would be easier for the reader to understand the information if it was broken up more. I did find a few things in your article that could be applicable to mine. If I can find this information on my plant then I would want to add more about the damage it does and the damage that is done to it. Also, since my plant is invasive I could put something about that instead of conservation status. Yes, your article does meet the 1200 word count. Great Job Tom!