User talk:Tsrapp

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Hey Thomas, looks like some of your changes were undone, citing concerns about prose and sourcing. You might have better luck editing the second article, as it's less well-developed and needs more expansion than the first. Looking at your sandbox content, I would recommend finding some additional sources. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:05, 19 October 2012 (UTC)