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Peer Review Response:

All comments and feedback from Dr. Shaw and peer reviewer were very helpful in indicating what I can work on to improve my article. Regarding my sources, comments were made on how I could improve using certain sources. This could be improved by finding more reliable sources and not opinion based articles/journals/etc. Trying to find updated and un biased sources is key to improving my edits. I could do this by visiting the library and talking to the librarian about finding better sources and exploring the virtual community databases that the library offers. I can also explore sources that Dr. Shaw has provided for class readings, there is a lot of relevant information of virtual communities in our readings in class so I will definitely look into using the sources provided. Overall, I'm going to work on adding more edits to my article by using reliable sources and expanding on how the new sources provide new insights to my topic. I will also work to improve my general overall edits. There's always room for improvement no matter how good edits can be, so I will do my best to improve my overall edits and adding of reliable sources for my topic.