User talk:Tug95050/Janet Abbate

Ok start but you want to find more sources *about* Abbate published by others. For instance, as I've mentioned before, can you find any academic book reviews of her second book that you could add here. Also what might you be able to add about her other publications, her media appearances, etc?Adrishaw (talk) 21:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

I see in the feedback that you said to remove citations that I did not add but were in the existing article, but I did not add. I believe the citations you are referring to are the updated citations I have added that replaced citations in the existing article that either linked to an incorrect or outdated page. Additionally, you said I deleted a sentence that criticized her work but I do not see the sentence you are referring to. There is one sentence that criticized "Recoding Gender" that I broke up and made its own sentence, and moved after the sentence I added which praised the work. I believe I have fixed all of the other minor issues you have pointed out. Tug95050 (talk) 14:43, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Great, thank you for clarifying what you changed about those citations. As for the negative sentence, I realize now I was mixing up your sandbox and the exisitng article! All I can say is that it has been a long semester/year. I apologize for the mix up. Your edits are good to go.Adrishaw (talk) 12:40, 12 April 2021 (UTC)