User talk:Tuh23831/AliceMarwicksandboxdraft

Things to work on for your Week 9 continued edits:


 * Bibliography: You need to find sources that are not just published bio pages. As I've mentioned before, a good place to look is published reviews of Dr. Marwick's work (such as reviews of her books published in academic journals). There is also often news posted about Carnegie Fellows which you could cite instead of her website, etc. Kristina DeVoe or I can help guide you, but you need to set up a time to talk with one of us.
 * Content: The lede could be better structured (for instance she is both an assistant professor at UNC AND an affiliated research with Data & Society; as written your paragraph makes that confusing. Similarly this is inaccurate: "Her research work includes podcast's where she discusses her research"-- if there is something in those podcasts you think you might cite, you can cite them, but it doesn't belong in the lede. For the Written Works section, add more summarizing her research (this is where book reviews come in handy).
 * You also need to clean up some of the content in the sandbox. Under accomplishments there are things that I think are from old drafts and should be deleted.
 * I recommend making a list of things you plan on working on next and then you can go through and cross them off as you accomplish them here (you can do the same with things I've suggested you work on here.

Adrishaw (talk) 12:39, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

I updated books with reviews discussing them. I added NPR as a source when describing where Alice Marwick works at the beginning. I'm a little unsure with citing as I feel like I need to work on that the most and if needed will add another source from the book review. Tuh23831 (talk) 21:53, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 12 feedback: This all looks great and is ready to move to live wikipedia. Great work! Adrishaw (talk) 22:52, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

There were some technical updates to my Wikipedia article from other users with the addition of categories, but nothing substantial in terms of the content that was asked to be changed. Tuh23831 (talk) 22:02, 3 December 2020 (UTC)