User talk:Tuj62385/Music technology (electronic and digital)

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After reviewing my instructor and peer review I've noted that I will need to


 * 1) Cite my sources in which information is being used. This is needed to improve the existing article at hand.
 * 2) Quality of writing and being intentional in my sandbox. I should make it clear what has been edited and not copy-writing entire text from the article in my sandbox.
 * 3) Successfully achieve editing goals: in improving the article, make sure advertisement biases are fully removed. Continue in-text citations
 * 4) Clarify sections " Synthesizers" as well as "Digital Synthesizers in Japan". Eliminate repetitive information, keep topics completely accurate and informing.
 * 5) Correct the timeline so that the entire article flows easily for one read.

Tuj62385 (talk) 20:06, 25 November 2023 (UTC)