User talk:Tul10616/Aniconism in Judaism/KaelBanks Peer Review

Tul10616/Aniconism in Judaism/KaelBanks Peer Review

Hi, To start off I think you have a strong introduction to your wikipedia article and overall great information on your topic. I think the only thing I would suggest is to rearrange the starting sentence of the introduction a bit. Maybe instead of putting "A number of verses in the Hebrew Bible (also known as the Tanakh) refer to prohibitions against the creation of various forms of images, invariably linked directly with idolatry" you could say something like " The Hebrew Bible,(maybe adding a little more context and information on the Hebrew Bible itself) then proceed with " Its also a book filled with a number of verses (also known as the Tanakh) referred to"... I feel like it could add more to the intro, not that it wasn't good before but maybe some more information. Overall you're doing great with the article, good luck.