User talk:Tulpenfeld

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoperl (January 14)
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Stellany (talk) 22:04, 14 January 2014 (UTC)

Hi Tulpenfeld,

There are several reasons why your article reads like an advertisement: first, it makes claims that are not sourced or verifiable and secondly, you are using wording that is not objective and does not represent a neutral point of view. For instance, there is nothing to support statements like "unusually advanced for the time" and according to what source was "a great many innovations...developed there..."? When these types of words are used in a biography they are considered peacock terms. And you are essentially promoting this company when you use words such as "wide range of plumbing products", "a great many innovations...", which is also too vague. And the last paragraph reads like a brochure for the product and the last sentence is not technically detailed and is too vague. To get an idea of how your page should read, check out these wiki pages: Moen_(company), Craftsman_(tools). Another tip is to write the page as if you knew nothing about the company and the only information you had is what you got from research on the web or in books.

Hope this helps, Stellany (talk) 00:55, 21 January 2014 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Neoperl Group


Hello Tulpenfeld. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Neoperl Group".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 13:15, 15 July 2014 (UTC)

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Neoperl


Hello Tulpenfeld. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Neoperl".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply and remove the  or  code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 10:29, 8 August 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoperl Group (September 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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 DGG ( talk ) 23:14, 26 September 2014 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Neoperl Group


Hello, Tulpenfeld. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Neoperl Group".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 11:58, 29 April 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoperl Group (February 17)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Anarchyte was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Anarchyte  (work  &#124; talk )   09:19, 17 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoperl Group (March 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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LaMona (talk) 01:17, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Neoperl Group


Hello, Tulpenfeld. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Neoperl Group".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Onel 5969  TT me 19:02, 2 December 2016 (UTC)