User talk:Tuo68169/Vandalism/KaelBanks Peer Review

User talk:Tuo68169/Vandalism/KaelBanks Peer Review

Hi, Overall your wikipedia article is great so far, you have a lot of good information and historical context that allows the audience to know your topic in depth. One small thing I did notice in the beginning of your article was the repeated use of "The Vandals" in each starting sentence which I understand is to emphasize that your taking about them, but I think maybe using other words like "this group: or other synonyms would be a good tool. But besides that the article is very informative, good luck with your article.