User talk:Turny1516/Evaluate an Article

Feedback on Article Evaluation
This is a very solid article evaluation. While you accept that the existing content is valid and reasonable, you've identified some legitimate issues with the lead section, missing content, lack of sources, limited talk page conversations, and images worth including. I would have liked to have known more about your thoughts on the organization of the article (are the headings in a good order? what other headings should be added?), the quality of the sources used, and some specific examples of sources that could be integrated. In particular, I think some care has to be given to how to talk about both "the" Sword dance (the iconic Highland dance) vs. sword dances as a genre of dance. While I can see that there are some references to dirk (and similar) dances, they are decidedly overshadowed by discussion of "the" Sword dance. Do you have thoughts on how these topics could be better addressed? CBFraoch (talk) 19:29, 15 November 2023 (UTC)