User talk:Twils637/sandbox

Twils637

I really like your topic! I only have a few comments that fit here. Add transitions to make the different flow more smoothly. When adding quotes, explain them without just dropping them into the article. Explain arguments and what Rousey does in better detail in order for the reader to have a greater understanding of what she's all about.

I emailed my comments to Liam.

Mlir93 (talk) 14:46, 27 October 2015 (UTC)