User talk:TwoHorned/work under way 1

Comments

 * infobox: the video rushes are no longer a available on youtube. Augean Stables (Richard Landes' blog) is not a neutral and admissible source.
 * Lead: "Jamal al-Durrah and his 12-year-old son, Muhammad, were filmed by Talal Abu Rahma, a Palestinian cameraman freelancing for France 2". Talal Abu Rahma and Enderlin have been working together for more than 20 years, and Enderlin reasserted his total faith in Rahma's honesty.
 * Reference [1]: Richard Landes' Augean Stables is a partisan blog and should not used as a reference in the lead.
 * Ariel Sharon visit and Second Intifada: I don't see the reasons to develop here a discussion on the cause of the second intifada: the article develops by giving many references on it, without mentioning the ... wikipedia article on the subject, which echoes the various points of views. A simple mention seems sufficient, with a reference to the main article.
 * Other teams present: the article forgets to mention the presence of the NHK.
 * "See also" section: Pierre Rehov is not an admissible source (one of his documentaries has been repeatedly refused by German-French Arte channel), nor is the "Decryptage" movie by Tarnero. These two sources are too deeply involved in the conspiracy theory to be presented as alternative sources. On the contrary, they should be quoted in the main text, with sources that describe their work in neutral manner.