User talk:Two Lost Souls Swimming In A Fishbowl

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Hey, I don't exactly know what's going on but I caanot comprehend how you can add this"* 1942 – Roger A. Sheldon, green chemist" to the Events section, when it is a nonsensical sentence fragment, which would not even qualify for inclusion in the years of birth section, which may be where you thought you were. Take a look at the page and the way it is formatted. Also, "green scientist" is not a satisfactory description. Nationality and valid occupation/profession/vocation are required. You are doing something wrong. Do not restore until you figure it out. Quis separabit? 23:55, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
 * OK you are halfway there but must still correct the description. As I posted above: "Also, "green scientist" is not a satisfactory description. Nationality and valid occupation/profession/vocation are required.". You're getting there. Quis separabit?  23:57, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Let's go, it's not fair to expect other editors to do your work for you. I'll be happy to advise but you need to put your nose to the grindstone. I hope you are not resting on your laurels, you have to correct all of these edits going back to the edit you made on 15 March (all the prior ones have been corrected by other editors); i.e. nationality and profession/occupation matching that of the subject's article page. Quis separabit?  00:23, 29 May 2015 (UTC)