User talk:Txulaedu/Tchoupitoulas St

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Remember that you need to start with a lead that does not have a heading. You've got a good framework for your article here, but you are rushing through all of the content. Slow down and explain the details you now just mention. Who was Barthelmy Lafon? What was his involvement that led to his naming of the street. Why is Emeril's or Mother's worth noting here? Why should anyone care that they are on Tchoupitoulas?

One thing you are missing that is pretty essential for your topic is the name of the street. Some things just have to be addressed, so you want to look for information both about where the name comes from and how it is supposed to be pronounced.

jtodd1973 16:14, 9 March 2021 (UTC)