User talk:TyWil24

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Welcome!
Hello, TyWil24, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:39, 25 April 2023 (UTC)

Feedback on Deaf representation in sports
Hi @TyWil24, Thanks for creating this article on Deaf Representation In Sports. As you can see, it's been tagged as being too essay like and containing original research.

Inline citations: A place to start to address these concerns, is to go over the text and make sure that a reliable source can support or back up each sentence that you have in the sandbox. If any reader wants to check if a sentence has accurate information, they can click on the inline citation and find that information in the cited source. This will help you see what text can remain and what text is fluff or original research, and can then be removed.

Sources:"No original research" means your writing for Wikipedia will summarize what other people have said about a topic you’re interested in, so that a Wikipedia reader can get an overview of the current thoughts and understanding of that topic. I recommend you find reliable sources from academic journals or trustworthy news coverage to provide a well balanced summary on the topic. Currently you cite websites and blogs, which aren't necessarily trustworthy or reliable sources of information.

Lead section: The lead section should be less of an introduction and more of a succinct summary of the article. Your opening sentence needs to tell your readers, as directly as possible, what the topic of the article is. The remainder of the lead should summarize all the major points of the article in a paragraph or two. The lead sentence should go something like "Deaf representation is sports is..."

Let me know if you have any questions about the feedback above. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:47, 25 April 2023 (UTC)