User talk:Tyjhuff/sandbox

Peer Review
These seem like good points, although you need to elaborate more and provide more content. Your sources look credible. Think Sandwich when you're revising and include the significance of your content. Taliazapata (talk) 16:04, 11 March 2019 (UTC) Talizapata 2019-03-11

Your sources all look good, and your content is intriguing. It would help to describe what an empathy map is. Also, another digital marketing strategy or two could help elaborate. Hannah171501 (talk) 21:34, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

Draft Feedback
Ty, I agree with your peer reviewers that more explanation is needed in your draft material. Fitting this into the WP article will require more text so that it is integrated seamlessly. JAirhart 20:42, 12 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)