User talk:TylerBridge/sandbox

Hi Tyler,

Thanks for the draft - I have some comments for you: Let me know if I can help out with any of the above - Ms. Becvar Kairyth (talk) 17:18, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Word count is really low (651). Even if you add an image, you still need to have at least 800 words of NEW content. Please get that word count up
 * Outside references are good, although you have them displayed in there twice, so you might need to explore how to remove the extra set of citations
 * You don't have any internal links to other Wikipedia articles - I suggest linking to Honda Motor Company, and other articles related to parts that you mention (hydraulic disc brake and others). You need at least 8 internal links for the final draft.
 * Neutrality is still a problem - "sub par", "somewhat ahead of themselves", "best year" -- all of those statements are NOT neutral, and that's just the first paragraph