User talk:TylerCBFree725/sandbox

A very well written article with many strong points, good facts, and good range of sources. I couldn't find anything too egregious so most of my suggestions will just be little, nit picks.

- In your opening start with some more info on the history and background of the Navajo. This would help establish the group of people your talking about especially for those who have never heard of the Navajo. - Since you pointed out that food insecurity is a big problem in the Navajo culture maybe add more info about that, and definitely add some statistics. - Since you made clear that fried bread is a big staple of the Navajo try making that its own section because you have a lot of info on it. - Last suggestion is that have a section about how the federal government effected the Navajo and their eating culture.

Overall very good job — Preceding unsigned comment added by As!28 (talk • contribs) 00:09, 3 November 2016 (UTC)