User talk:Tyler Brewer/sandbox

FEEDBACK:

So far, this is very good information you have collected. It seems you have found information is lacking in the article for late last year and early this year, and you have grasped on to that in order to edit your article and add information to it. This is a very good way to do this, and you are providing very useful information. Your third piece of information, however, seems to not be information fit for an article. It sounds like an opinion. I would reword it, and improve it to sound more like factual information. Maybe include who said it, and use quotes. Otherwise, your information is good. You have sources and you seem to know exactly what you are doing. Great work.

RESPONSE:

Thank you for the input. On the third source, I reworded it so it sounds like less of an opinion, it was not meant to be an opinion, only a fact but I now understand how it could have come off that way. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tyler Brewer (talk • contribs) 16:56, 25 March 2020 (UTC)