User talk:Tzaino

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Hello,, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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 * Hi! I wanted to give you a bit of a welcome and a little feedback on your sandbox draft. When writing, make sure that you source your claims with reliable sources like academic books and journals. You also need to make sure that the work isn't an WP:ESSAY, as articles need to be written in an encyclopedic format and should not contain persuasive writing or original research on the topic matter. I'm concerned that your sandbox draft is written too much like an essay. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:39, 28 June 2017 (UTC)