User talk:UKI2020

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Jarrett Collins (September 11)
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Eternal Shadow  Talk  03:30, 11 September 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Jarrett Collins (December 14)
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Theroadislong (talk) 10:29, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Jarrett Collins (July 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Nightenbelle were:

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Nightenbelle (talk) 16:37, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

Hyperlinks
There should not be hyperlinks in the body of the article, such as in Awards. David notMD (talk) 17:32, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Ok - I have removed all hyperlinks and replaced them with citations. --UKI2020 (talk) 17:53, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Refs
Check all your refs. You should not cite another encyclopedia, and you cannot use a pdf of a newspaper article, as that is a copyright infraction (ref #5). All that is needed is that you cite the newspaper, date and pages. The lead is a bit blah (and short). Can add that at Sylvania in 1960, he led a team that developed the first functional bar code system, for tracking railroad cars, and subsequently worked on developing laser bar code systems. David notMD (talk) 21:34, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

I can't tell you how grateful I am for your help. I've updated citations to remove the encyclopedia, put in the newspaper information instead of the PDF, and updated the top line. Thank you again. --UKI2020 (talk) 22:13, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Jarrett Collins has been accepted
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Thanks again, and happy editing! &#8213; Qwerfjkl talk  18:39, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

Congrats for getting an interesting article accepted. David notMD (talk) 01:43, 18 July 2021 (UTC)