User talk:Uilleam1/Choose an Article

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Overall, these are good potential articles and good assessments. I like how you draw on some specific content from Newton that you could incorporate into the Celtic Harp article. At this point, you've also read the Bannerman, you've looked at an online source, and you've heard your classmates present on two other articles. I definitely think you have quite a bit of content on which you could draw in order to provide citations for existing content or to provide new content. You are right that all cultures change. As a result, such a broad statement is perhaps not helpful for deepening a reader's understanding of CB fiddling. What would need to be cited (and would be helpful) is specific evidence of how the CB fiddling style has changed (when, why, how, by whom).

I do recommend that you master some editing skills. First, it would be helpful if you provided a link to each article. Second, limit bold to headings or selected words; don't use bold for all text. Third, rather than pasting an actual URL into your text, hyperlink text.

Nice work! CBFraoch (talk) 21:11, 15 November 2023 (UTC)