User talk:Uiseon1012/Evaluate an Article

I decided to evaluate the article "Problematic social media." The article describes the symptoms of mental health. Moreover, it concisely explains the mechanisms of social media usage impacting mental and physical health. This article contains a relevant topic that describes why social media usage is problematic and how it affects people negatively. Also, the sources are cited and stated in references with the hyperlink. Also, the tone is neutral and doesn't show personal attacks or sensitive words. The viewpoints are shown properly by describing the mechanisms. However, I would like to hear more about the different mechanisms. In detail, the citations are reliable, but some of the contents may need the citation. There is several missed citation on the mechanism part, and I feel it requires more research to understand the relationship between social media usage and the psychological understanding of human. Also, the article needs to take the diversity of people by indicating multiple sources to prove the reliability of their research.Uiseon1012 (talk) 01:54, 21 May 2023 (UTC)