User talk:Ulell/draftarticle

Hi Ulell, thank you for translating the article for me. I think this is a very competent way to get a new Wikpedia article under way. You may find it interesting to watch how it grows over time with inputs from others. The only suggestion I have is to make sure you put the most recent statistics last in a paragraph where you discuss such. For example the paragraph on unemployment, you put 2005 stats about differential rates between the two parts of Germany after you mention the all-Germany 2018 stat. Is there a 2018 stat for the 'two Germany' disparity? Is the disparity a social issue itself? (I wonder?). The abortion one surprises me although I knew that at unification this was a big difference for women between the two. I hope you will publish the German one. I think it is ready. I also hope you will add your Lead Section and the German section to the English one. I am happy to assist with the latter and find some English language references should you wish to proceed. The English page is not good and its German section could do with your update and more sociological approach. Please let me know when you publish the German article and I wonder if you would mind me 'chatting' to you on email once your assignments are in, about your experience working between the two Wikipedias as a student editor. JaneHaggis 05:35, 21 October 2019 (UTC)