User talk:Umjyntbr

I just wanted to query your recent edits. There are edits on Clubmoor, which are interesting, and possibly useful, but you have made some mistakes in grammar and having had a look at this, i can't be sure where it is, as the location of the source with the railway line is at the back of Anfield Cemetery which is probably Walton. Your sources don't quite verify it is Clubmoor.
 * Also you added reference to the area being a "very green area compared to some other places" and go on to say "The fields pretty well stretched to Walton Hall Park". What do you mean by the fields? As this is not strictly true. Again you refer to baseball being played on "the field". What does that mean, "the field" ? I am not sure this all stacks up.
 * While your edits to promote Deysbrook as some kind of district are a bit misguided and over the top as there is no such place. There is Deysbrook Lane and there is the former Deysbrook barracks with the Tesco there using the term Deysbrook, but this is all by the by as the area is West Derby, there is just no case. According to your last edit you even opened a page for "Nogzy". Norris Green is the name street slang for the area does not make it a district. Babydoll9799 (talk) 12:41, 17 October 2011 (UTC)