User talk:Unable11

August 2018
Hello, I'm Oshwah. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Kim Rubenstein, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks.  ~Oshwah~  (talk) (contribs)   04:30, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Susan Broomhall (August 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:22, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

susan broomhall article
WP:MOS does not like ext links in text - they need to be references - just a space note/thing to remember JarrahTree 00:44, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * beginning to look like a cv - take real care JarrahTree 00:41, 2 September 2018 (UTC)