User talk:Uncertainty3214

Your submission at Articles for creation: George Henry Freedman (September 4)
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Abdullah Alam (talk) 05:47, 4 September 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: George Henry Freedman (September 5)
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Abdullah Alam (talk) 03:35, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

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Robert McClenon (talk) 02:52, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Multiple copies
You seem to be creating multiple copies of your submission about George Freeman, I've deleted them all except the most recent one which is User:Uncertainty3214/sandbox. Please just work on this copy in future. As it stands you have a lot of duplicated copy in there. You don't need to re-add everything each time the submission is declined, just edit the existing copy; it can always be compared against the previous version from the page history. Although it looks like you have added some references, the formatting makes it very difficult to see this and what they support. Wikipedia has several ways of marking up references and you need to adopt one of these. The commonest and how to do it is laid out at Referencing for beginners. Have a read of that page then try and use the information on your submission. That way it is going to be a lot easier for a reviewer to decide if he is a notable person, from what I can glean, he probably is but the information needs laying out in a way that this is easier to tell. Nthep (talk) 12:10, 15 September 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Uncertainty3214 (talk) 08:19, 16 September 2016‎ (UTC)

The article is back up for review. I didn't get that it was blank so perhaps there is progress. I think it's now a concern of referencing style

I have added email links if there is doubt with his notability.

Can you please provide an example of referencing style?

Also I find the jargin of sandboxes and tea house limiting and confusing. What are they in reference to? Can they/ it be more appropriately named?

The userbility is surprisingly overwhelming and without rhythm. Very daunting for a novice and older user

Your draft article, Draft:George Henry Freedman


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 05:16, 22 May 2017 (UTC)