User talk:Undercaker

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel Millar (May 3)
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Paul W (talk) 21:27, 3 May 2024 (UTC)


 * @Paul W Hi Paul. Thanks so much for the feedback here. I really appreciate it. I'm a total novice when it comes to creating a new page so any and all advice is very welcome. I will review this and resubmit as and when. Just to clarify, it is 'evidence for notability' that you are looking for with this kind of submission, is that right? Many thanks again. Undercaker (talk) 21:56, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
 * The key is verifiability (WP:V) - statements about the subject, particularly in a biography of a living person, need "an inline citation to a reliable source that directly supports the material". Many thanks. Paul W (talk) 16:42, 4 May 2024 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Something in the Water (June 22)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Something in the Water (2024 film) (June 22)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 20:48, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Something in the Water (2024 film) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Something in the Water (2024 film). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 20:49, 22 June 2024 (UTC)


 * @Robert McClenon Thanks Robert. I appreciate you leaving a more detailed message. This is the first page about a film that I've created. If you can, are you able to recommend *specific* sources and references for film that aren't IMDB or reviews? I'm aware this film exists - I saw it today - so I'm a little lost as which websites and publications consitiute 'reliable' in Wikipedia's view. Thanks again for taking the time, Robert. Undercaker (talk) 21:17, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
 * User:Undercaker - Reviews are the reliable sources that are significant coverage of any film. You have put in footnotes for two reviews, but you didn't summarize them, so what you should do is to add a Reception section summarizing what the reviews said.  Robert McClenon (talk) 22:01, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Robert McClenon Thanks Robert. I have done that and resubmitted, so fingers crossed. Thanks for your help. Undercaker (talk) 22:44, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Something in the Water (2024 film) (June 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 11:09, 23 June 2024 (UTC)


 * @SafariScribe Thanks for the feedback. Have resubmitted without IMDB references Undercaker (talk) 11:21, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Something in the Water (2024 film) has been accepted
 Something in the Water (2024 film), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! Ae245 (talk) 11:47, 23 June 2024 (UTC)


 * @Ae245 Thank you very much. Much appreciated. Undercaker (talk) 11:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC)