User talk:Underhand

1st paragraph of section "" refers: SBVR is a landmark for the OMG, the first OMG specification to incorporate the formal use of natural language in modeling and the first to provide explicitly a model of formal logic. Based on a fusion of linguistics, logic, and computer science, and two years in preparation, SBVR provides a way to capture specifications in natural language and represent them in formal logic so they can be machine-processed. Come on guys... words like "landmark", turns of phrase like "the first...", "...and the first to... " and "two years in preparation" ring so jarring jingo of embed me journo. This be abominable copy, culminating with the pathetikest of all "... a fusion of linguistics, " linguine, " logic..."

Seriously, it sounds like a CIA promo.

Underhand (talk) 22:29, 19 February 2008 (UTC)