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Your submission at Articles for creation: Qian Tang (April 8)
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 Onel 5969  TT me 17:21, 8 April 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Qian Tang has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Qian Tang. Thanks! Seraphim System ( talk ) 08:59, 30 May 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Qian Tang has been accepted
 Qian Tang, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 12:53, 13 June 2017 (UTC)
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June 2017
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. We welcome and appreciate your contributions, but it appears you have written or added to an article about yourself, at Qian Tang. Creating an autobiography is strongly discouraged – see our guideline on writing autobiographies. If you create such an article, it may be deleted. If what you have done in life is genuinely notable and can be verified according to our policy for articles about living people, someone else will probably create an article about you sooner or later (see Wikipedians with articles). If you wish to add to an existing article about yourself, please propose the changes on its talk page. Please understand that this is an encyclopedia and not a personal web space or social networking site. If your article has already been deleted, please see: Why was my page deleted?, and if you feel the deletion was an error, please discuss it with the deleting administrator. Thank you. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 12:57, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

The order that chronological events should appear in
In the Qian Tang your original draft listed their career in reverse chronological order. When I performed a clean up on the draft before accepting it into the main encyclopedia, I reversed the order so that the early part of their career appears first, and the most recent posts last. I didn't do that because of personal preference, but because that is the standard on Wikipedia (see Teahouse). You will find that since Wikipedia has been around a long time, there are many conventions that are in place, and we follow them to achieve consistency and therefore improve the usability of the encyclopedia. You may personally find that someone's career is easier to follow if laid out like a CV with the most recent role at the top, but Wikipedia isn't a free place to publish your CV. Please also note that when someone changes something in an article, you shouldn't change it back without discussing the issue first on the article's talk page - see WP:BRD. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 19:49, 13 June 2017 (UTC)