User talk:Unified101/sandbox2

This is just a suggestion, but to avoid a run-on sentence you should re-word this sentence "The book depicts a mother duck who discovers that one of her ducklings has gone missing and she frantically leads a search with her other ducklings around the pond asking their neighbor animals if they have seen her duckling." It should be "The book depicts a mother duck who discovers that she is missing one of her ducklings. She frantically leads a search with her other ducklings around the pond, and asks her neighbor animals if they have seen her duckling."

Maybe just line the names to other articles
Just link the important names in the article on Wikipedia.Katiea32 (talk) 18:16, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

Suggestion
Your article is great! But the coding seems a little messed up. You may want to fix that up to make it neat. That's all.- NostalgicIntrovert