User talk:Unkledy

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Hello, Unkledy, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions, especially your edits to Jennifer Ouellette (milliner). I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful: Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or and a volunteer will visit you here shortly. Again, welcome! Mabalu (talk) 00:30, 23 November 2014 (UTC)
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Hi - thanks for your edits on the Jennifer Ouellette bio. While a lot of your edits are very much appreciated, some of the edits sound more like promotion than encyclopaedic biography. In particular, please be careful when editing an article and adding information mid-sentence, as new information must be cited (so the Dita Von Teese addition would need a separate cite. Is it necessary to list her alongside the other four names listed? Also, some of your added text was copied and pasted verbatim from the Review Connection article, which is a huge no-no. This is considered copyright violation and must be reverted immediately where noticed. I have modified your edits and toned down some of the promotional language, but a lot of what you did was helpful, so I just wanted to post a fuller explanation here. Mabalu (talk) 01:14, 23 November 2014 (UTC)