User talk:Unseen Rain

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jack DeSalvo (May 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

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KJP1 (talk) 06:44, 24 May 2018 (UTC)