User talk:Upton84

Draft:Manteresting
You appear to have some good sourcing, to news websites and the like, but a reader can't actually see what you're sourcing since you've simply clumped the links at the end of the page. If you render your sources as WP:Footnotes, then we can see which sources back up which facts. And if you format them as WP:Citations, it'll be clear to the reader which news site, article title, and date you're referring to.

WP:Referencing for beginners has some great tips on how best to do this. If you make this fix it'll be way easier to get your draft published. MatthewVanitas (talk) 21:32, 8 June 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Manteresting (June 9)
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Draft:Manteresting concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Manteresting, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Draft:Manteresting concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Manteresting, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:30, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Manteresting concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Manteresting, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:30, 20 September 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Manteresting


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 02:00, 20 October 2015 (UTC)