User talk:User1017/sandbox

As your peer reviewer mentioned, the organization of your potential edits by section allows your reviewers to understand your plan/potential edits. Your bibliography page shows you collected several useful sources. Additionally, any of the four areas that you would like to improve would work for this assignment. Be aware that you don't have complete edits for all four areas unless you want to.DrTraceyJHayes (talk) 19:11, 27 February 2021 (UTC)

Hi there!

I really like how you broke down the possible edits to this article by section. You also seem to have multiple academic sources, which is a great way to keep things neutral.

I am curious if there are any recent news articles regarding SMO and COVID-19 that you could reference there?

Katiem3410 (talk) 22:14, 22 February 2021 (UTC)Katie M.