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Your submission at Articles for creation: Svitlana Biedarieva (August 28)
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ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 18:26, 28 August 2023 (UTC)


 * I disagree with this decision. The sources listed are reliable, peer reviewed third-party sources which are independent and reliable. This includes Art Margins published by MIT Press, October journal (also MIT Press) which is of the most respected international journals in art history, Space and Culture journal published by SAGE, Financial Times, and the Burlington Journal, among others. Additionally, there are pages on the Woodrow Wilson International Center and CEC ArtsLink Residency in New York where her profiles are listed. All these are independent sources. The only source directly linked to her is the personal website.  User18762 (talk) 16:55, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I have resubmitted, adding several third-party indepndent sources. Please review User18762 (talk) 20:14, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Can you choose ~5 refs that you think demonstrate her notability the best? Keep in mind that the sources should be independent, reliable and provide significant coverage. Since she is also an artist, you can also choose to demonstrate her notability under WP:NARTIST. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 20:44, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * The source analysis I performed for your first submission:
 * Refs 1-9: By her, so aren't independent
 * Refs 10-11: Her website, so not independent.
 * Refs 11-15: Profiles of her ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 20:38, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I have added several sources, please check User18762 (talk) 20:46, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Please see my other reply above. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 20:46, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Refs 21, 18, 17, 13, 14, 15. 16, 10, 23, 24, 1 User18762 (talk) 20:49, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Ref 21: Discusses her work more than her, but count towards Criteria#3 at WP:NARTIST so looks fine.
 * Ref 18: An interview, so doesn't count as not independent.
 * Ref 17: Partly by her, so doesn't count as not independent.
 * Refs 13 and 14: If you can prove the exhibition was significant/important, it satisfies crit#4 at WP:NARTIST. Otherwise, looks to be WP:ROUTINE coverage of an event.
 * Refs 15 and 16: By her or interview with her, so doesn't count as not independent.
 * Ref 24: She's mentioned once (checked using ctrl+f), so doesn't count as no significant coverage.
 * Ref 25: Once again, not really about her, about the exhibition so no significant coverage.
 * Ref 10: My translator doesn't work on downloaded pdfs, but seems to be similar to the previous exhibition coverage, so see above.
 * Overall, only refs 21 and the exhibition coverage may count. For the exhibition coverage, you need to demonstrate that her work has "been a substantial part of a significant exhibition." Doesn't currently seem to meet WP:NBIO, but I'll let a different reviewer review it again.
 * PS. the reason I asked for around 5 refs was because it makes it easier for us. Next time, please only provide the number of refs asked. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:11, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I added one more in the styke of ref 21. - ref 23 User18762 (talk) 21:21, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * For the criteria 3: The person has created or played a major role in co-creating a significant or well-known work or collective body of work. In addition, such work must have been the primary subject of multiple independent periodical articles or reviews, or of an independent and notable work (for example, a book, film, or television series, but usually not a single episode of a television series);
 * Book reviews: 1,2, 32
 * Reviews of the exhibitions that she curated: 24,25,19
 * Coverage of her artistic work: 10,11, 13,14,  User18762 (talk) 21:26, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Leave this as a comment on the draft. I'm letting a different reviewer review this. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:37, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I have found two references more, so the reference numbers that I mentioned in my previous message goes +2 after ref 14 User18762 (talk) 22:58, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Svitlana Biedarieva has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Svitlana Biedarieva. Thanks! 2NumForIce (speak  &#124; edits) 17:33, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your comment. The license on the source website has beeen updated to CC BY-NC-SA 4.0 User18762 (talk) 20:36, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Sorry, CC-BY-SA 4.0 User18762 (talk) 20:44, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * So what is your association with this person, since you got her to change her copyright(which is still incompatible)? 331dot (talk) 21:47, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Images are not relevant to the draft approval process anyway; I would just wait and sort out the images later. 331dot (talk) 21:49, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * i simply emailed to the contact page of the website User18762 (talk) 21:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Are you otherwise in communication with her about your efforts? 331dot (talk) 22:14, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * no. my aim is to make an account of people who work with curatorial practice and art in ukraine. this is the first trial article User18762 (talk) 22:44, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

My cuts and moving content done with intent to improve chance a reviewer will approve. Your ref cuts also a good idea. In the end, her career may not be sufficiently advanced to merit an article (see WP:TOOSOON). Being an editor of books is less valuable than being a sole author. David notMD (talk) 20:58, 1 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your help with references! I appreciate it. This is very useful to learn the correct format!
 * There are generally very few books published in her field, so can be still valuable (or qualify as WP:NARTIST, as the reviewer mentioned). User18762 (talk) 22:12, 1 September 2023 (UTC)

Women in Red
Hi there, User18762, and welcome to Women in Red. I see from your comments above that you are keen to cover women artists and art curators in Ukraine. This should certainly help us along with our efforts to chip away at the gender gap on Wikipedia. Further to the excellent advice you have already received from other editors in connection with your first attempt at writing a biography, you will find some useful guidance in our essays, summarized in our Ten Simple Rules. Rather than including a long list of references, it is usually better to look first for three really good independent sources which provide detailed information on the subject. Once a short article has been accepted on this basis, in collaboration with contributions from other editors it can be expanded further. Why not try to rewrite your draft of Svitlana Biedarieva on this basis and let me know when you think it is ready for article space. We can then work together on bringing the draft up to acceptable standards. Please also let me know if you run into any other difficulties. Happy editing!--Ipigott (talk) 07:33, 31 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi, Ipigott, thank you for the warm welcome and all the advice! Happy to join the group. I believe it is important to give visibility to women in arts, and particularly, to develop deeper knowldege about women in Ukrainian culture, which is not very well known globally. I will work on the references and the text further to shorten them, and then let you know! User18762 (talk) 23:39, 31 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your improvements to Svitlana Biedarieva. I've moved it to mainspace. As she is an art historian and writer, I've tagged the talk page WIR-282 and included the article and the photo on our current focus page on women writers. Please let me know if you need any help with your next article. Happy editing!--Ipigott (talk) 06:43, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
 * @Ipigott Thank you very much for the edits and the review of the article! I greatly appreciate your help. This is very encouraging, and I am very happy that this topic is of interest! I have begun gathering material for next two articles about Ukrainian women in art; so soon I will post more :)   User18762 (talk) 00:49, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

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