User talk:Usirjkelly

Rmwheatley Peer Reviewer
1. I really liked the map you included in your article. It is always nice to see a visual of the area you are reading about. I also found the information you chose to include both unique and interesting. I enjoyed the awards and notable reporting assignments sections. 2. I would look at possibly adding more information to the infobox. I would also be careful of my grammer, there were a few sentances that felt like they read a little akward. There were no noticable punctions or spelling errors. Overall I was really impressed and enjoyed learning more about your journalist.Rmwheatley (talk) 02:43, 24 October 2012 (UTC) Welcome Usirjkelly! Now that you've joined Wikipedia, there are users!

Hello, Usirjkelly. Welcome to Wikipedia and thank you for your contributions! I'm Crtew, one of the other editors here, and I hope you decide to stay and help contribute to this amazing repository of knowledge. Alternatively, leave me a message at my talk page or type  here on your talk page, and someone will try to help. Remember to always sign your posts on talk pages. You can do this either by clicking on the button on the edit toolbar or by typing four tildes   at the end of your post. This will automatically insert your signature, a link to this (your talk) page, and a timestamp. The best way to learn about something is to experience it. Explore, learn, contribute, and don't forget to have some fun! To get some practice editing you can use a sandbox. You can [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:Mypage/sandbox&action=edit&preload=Template:User_Sandbox/preload create your own private sandbox] for use any time. Perfect for working on bigger projects. Then for easy access in the future, you can put  on your userpage.

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Good work
You are doing a good job so far. You created an account, wrote an introduction with a list, and left me a message. My suggestion is to play around with wikilinks now. To create a wikilink place two brackets before and after an article term. I placed two brackets before and after Cooper on our user page and that made a wikilink, an internal Wikipedia link, to his article. You can do that, too. Try doing this with the University of Southern Indiana. Have fun, Crtew (talk) 16:07, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

Assignment
Assigned Naseem Intriri (Algerian/French citizen) and Walid Bledi (Algerian/British citizen) who were shooting a documentary Syria Bold textand at the time covering refugees near the Turkish-Syrian border.Crtew (talk) 16:57, 10 September 2012 (UTC)

"Mewest Peer Review"
1. I like the start you have gotten on this article. It is interesting that she is still a living person. It also interests me about her documentary. Maybe include what it is called and what exactly the angle of the film is. I really liked the bullets added in "Notable Reporting" and adding her coworkers names/links to their info. Keep writing!

2. I would like to see more in the background. Kids? Husband? Also include background about Al Arabiya and what type/genre station they are. I suggest using her name (first or last) a little more often versus her/she. Who is responsible for bombing the news station? Do you know why they did it? Although she survived, was she injured?

Maddie West (talk) 18:30, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

Peer Review
Your page is looking very good, but I think it would be an improvement if you could fill in your info box more thoroughly. I definitely enjoyed all of the bullet points you included on this page. You need to fill in the Personal and Al Arabiya sections as well. Make sure to let it flow a bit more, keeping your sentences from being choppy.You're making very good progress though. It's a very good article! Sdhuskins (talk) 02:36, 25 October 2012 (UTC)Sdhuskins

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Hi! I work with the Wikipedia Education Program, and I'm hoping to get your feedback about your experience this semester! In order to help other students like you enjoy editing while contributing positively to Wikipedia, it would be very helpful to hear from real program students about their experience, so we know what to change. The survey takes no more than 10 minutes, and I'd really appreciate your response!

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