User talk:Uwjk360 sp2016

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Claire's Review of Groups 1 + 4
Group 1,

Well cited and it totally looks like a real Wiki article! This group used good sources, a professional sounding tone, and provided links for further information! One thing I would say is to either add to the “Video Game” section or take it out, just so it looks more clean or full? All writing in each section is clear, polished, and concise! It’s a really interesting topic but the article doesn’t need dozens of examples, so the sources used were all used relevantly.

As for questions: I’m curious if “victims” of Yandere characters’ love are aware that the girls are totally crazed? Are there any male counterparts to this in anime, video games, etc? Is yandere used exclusively for women? Why or why not?

Really well done!

Group 4,

This article definitely convinced me that this is a topic worth knowing about. The beginning description makes sense and does a good job of explaining what a pet cafe is. This article used a lot of sources and included lots of pictures, which I thought was a good added bonus!

The tone of the article sections do not sound Wikipedia-like, in my opinion. They are bit too conversational and use unnecessary words. For example in the phrase “lovely animals,” the word “lovely” is not needed. It takes away from how professional the claims you made sound! The bit about the Lion King sounded cute, but not as professional as a normal Wiki article would sound! The claim: “Playing with animals is a way to decrease stress and to get emotional therapy for individuals who live alone and isolated from the community” might need some backing up with facts or research! I might also break up each individual type of animal cafe and put them under a sub-subheading, so that the reading is broken up a bit more, is less confusing but still flows! There were also some grammatical errors scattered thoroughout the entire article. I would also avoid calling the reader "you," like instead of saying "You would like a cat cafe" you could say "One would like a cat cafe..." and list the reasons! Throughout the article the use of quotes and other examples were really good!

Overall, well done!

-- Claire

Jiajun's peer view:
Group 1

It's a worthy knowing topic, and it covered a basic understanding of Yandere. I'm thinking it would be more effective and convincing to add some pictures of Yandere characters in anime and video games. Do they usually have similar characteristics and wear similar styles of clothes? And I am also wondering is it popular or common to have Yandere characters in anime and video games? Why or why not?

Group 4

Your wiki page is nicely done, it already looks like the final version. It's interesting to know that there are so many different types of pet cafes. I only knew about the dog and cat cafe before reading the page. I am wondering where do the owners of these cafes get the pets? For example, are the dogs in the dog cafe originally fed by the owner of that cafe, or does the owner just buy the dogs in order to start the business? How are the pets taken care of at night when the cafe is closed? Also I personally feel like the layout of the different variety section and history section is a bit awkward. It may be better if you could divide them into different sections and create subtitles for them. Uwjk360 sp2016 (talk) 22:45, 25 May 2016 (UTC)Jiajun

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Your submission at Articles for creation: BB Cushion (July 25)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 18:19, 25 July 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Hozo has a new comment
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Pet cafe (July 25)
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Bradv 19:56, 25 July 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Airport Fashion (July 26)
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Gbawden (talk) 10:00, 26 July 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Will o' the Wisp (short story) (August 4)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Yandere (August 6)
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LaMona (talk) 23:12, 6 August 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hozo (August 6)
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LaMona (talk) 23:17, 6 August 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kakao Friends (August 29)
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Your draft article, Draft:Airport Fashion


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Your draft article, Draft:Hozo


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Your draft article, Draft:Pet cafe


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Your draft article, Draft:Will o' the Wisp (short story)


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Your draft article, Draft:Yandere


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Your draft article, Draft:Kakao Friends


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