User talk:VANESSAzyy/I-novel

User:VANESSAzyy/I-novel/Carochen215_Peer_Review Carochen215 (talk) 23:08, 31 January 2020 (UTC)

peer review from Zwdy
Great Job Vanessa!! The overall quality of the article is definitely improved, but I think there are still works to be done on polishing sentences and word choices. The article is much more arranged and comprehensive than the original one. Here is a more detailed review. I hope it helps! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:VANESSAzyy/I-novel/Zwdy_Peer_Review?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Zwdy (talk) 23:14, 31 January 2020 (UTC)

Feedback on your article
Greetings ! You seem to have done a great job improving this article. A few minor things:


 * You've added large block of text with no citations. It's a good idea to make sure you have citations throughout the text.
 * I noticed that you dropped the categories (this might be due in part to the visual editor). I've tried to add those back.
 * The authors and works section seems to have only authors and not any works.
 * There's a blank Transition section. I guess you probably want to just remove that?

Spend some time on your article to do a final pass and really polish it. Once you're ready, you should feel free to move it over and make it live. Good luck! — m a k o ๛  04:08, 13 February 2020 (UTC)