User talk:VHodges90/sandbox

Draft feedback
Phbrownacmorg (talk) 23:50, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
 * + Lots of good material!
 * + Good length
 * + Stub material imported, but not yet integrated
 * + Material from all three of you&mdash;good!
 * Suggestions for improvement:
 * Integrate the stub material into the main article. There's some good stuff in there that would benefit your text.
 * Re-check your organization. For example, why is the	information about Augustus the Strong in the Artwork section rather than the History section?  Porcelain manufacture seems like a major part of the castle's history, after all.
 * Cite Everything &#9786;. You appear to have the sources; they're just not attached directly to the material they supplied.