User talk:VK322/sandbox

In the first box of your chart diaulos is spelled incorrectly

Jess Boyle I love the table you put in, it's a very unique addition to your sandbox. Everyone has different ways of organizing their thoughts and ideas, and a table is actually really useful. I love how I can look over the table and instantly get an idea of what you're thinking of doing. Like we talked about, each article has a different need so some of them require actual paragraphs of additional texts, some of them need citations and links, and I think the Ancient Olympic Games absolutely could benefit from a table. That's good thinking! :) −		 −	I agree with you on that the chart should go in the history section. Instead of saying "This is some of the games that were played:" I would include a full sentence like, "Below is a chart illustrating some of the games played." Only because it looks more formal/professional and that's typically the style of charts I usually see on Wikipedia. −		 −	Overall, the chart is very well-organized. Clearly, you didn't just throw it into the article and add a couple of words. I like that there are multiple columns and each of them has a detailed, paragraph-long description.