User talk:VLBT2468/sandbox

Comments on Proposed Changes
I agree that the article could use a lot more citations. I might also re-write the first sentence of the paragraph entitled, "Levels of Processing," which I find a bit awkward. The sentence currently reads, "More detailed descriptions than that which results from a mere survey of the material are generally attempted." How about, "The archivist frequently attempts to create a more detailed description of the materials than the initial survey provides."Onionpatch534 (talk) 16:02, 25 October 2018 (UTC)