User talk:V mandujano/sandbox

Peer review done by Natalie Radrigan
The outline that you have covers what needs to be known in a biography on wikipedia. I suggest changing "a refined community organizer" to something more neutral, maybe "experienced community organizer". That is if that's what you meant by refined. For sources I searched on the web and she has her own website, along with her linked in which probably has her accomplishments. I'm not sure if they count as reliable sources, but it could get you started on knowing what to look for. Other than that it seems like you are on a good path to finishing this article successfully. Natalieradrigan (talk) 02:59, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review by Jessie Miller
I think you did a good job providing background on the subject but I think there needs to be more focus on her academic accomplishments. The "how is this article related to class content" question stands out the most. I think this article would benefit from touching on important topics Oparah has brought to the table under the realm of Black Feminist Thought. A good source would be the "Challenging Complexity" piece we read for class. Otherwise I think the organization makes sense and is well done. Also you have no sources cited, so be sure to add those as well. You mentioned her complex childhood as well so maybe looking at that from a black epistemology standpoint could be beneficial as well. Jemmiller96 (talk) 05:41, 30 April 2018 (UTC)